初中英语作文点评

“kksky”通过精心收集，向本站投稿了25篇初中英语作文点评，以下是小编帮大家整理后的初中英语作文点评，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。

篇1：初中英语作文点评

Last saturday ,my family kewn knew (the news that)i I won (the) English competitionnews . inIn order to cerebrate i had won English competition(it)., my parents decided to go to (a) nearbourhood club play on this sunday .weWe were very happiedhappy andlooked forwardto playing.looking forward to it.

InOn that day ,we were gegot up (very) early and eathad breakfast (quickly). Then we walked to (the) club slowly ,and chated each other .on our way to (the) club ,we talked ourselvswith each other very happyhappliy. Quickly Soon,we arrived (at the) club . this club had all sorts of palyWe can do a lot of things and enjoy ourselves in this club.such as sportdoing some sports ,amusement ,study and so onand studying .Look!when my parents went to read room ,they going to read. My parents were going to the reading room to do some reading. Grandma was talkedtalking to (some) other olderold people abortabout they lifelives,.(My) sisters playedwere playing badminton happily....what i didWhat did I do? I went to play computer games .we didn'tcamecome back until we palyedwere tired .What a happy day!

点评：

1、句首一定要大写，要注意一些拼写错误。

2、全文的时态一定要保持一致，如果是过去时就全部用过去时。

3、语法掌握得还是不太够。如：动词要用副词来修饰，系动词后要接形容词，such as前不用逗号隔开等等

4、该同学努力尝试描写清楚一件事情，这种态度很好，坚持下去，多练练，会有收获的。

篇2：初中英语作文点评

(Nowadays,) English is most widely used in the world,. It's very important，(b)But most of us have difficulty in learning it. If you have difficulty in English. (feel that it is not that easy to learn English well,) Here is some advice.

1. (Firstly,/First of all,) Listening (listen to) English songs,(and) watch English movies.

2. (Secondly,) Reading a passage (read some English passages),(t)Then try to retell it (them) (by) yourself.we(We) should speak English with our teachers,classmates an(and) even with foreigners as often as possible.

3. (Thirdly)You (you) can read the English paper or a magazine(s).such as Chain(China) Daily.

4. (Forthly) Keeping (keeping) a diary is a good way to practice your (English) writing.

5. (Last but not least,) If you can’t remember new words，you can copy them (write them down) onprices ( a piece) of paper. (then) stick them (it) on the walls in your room.

In a word. (All in all,) If you can keep on learning English and never give up, I'm sure your

English will become (be) better and better!

点评：

1、三段式的写作结构很好，清晰了然。

2、注意只有句首的首字母才需要大写。

3、举例或罗列时，最好不要用阿拉伯数字1、2、3……。要用英语写，我已经在文中修改过了。

4、总体来说，句子结构相对简单，可以尝试用一两句从句，这样文章会增彩不少。

篇3：初中英语作文点评

Hu Yue is my new friend，In our class, she likes singing and she can sing very well.

She's 1.60meters tall. she has blank hair and wears school uniform.She is very lovely and pretty. She likes eating hamburger, vegetable and peanuts and dislikes fishesfish, green tea and sweets,She also loves listening to music,reading and writing. Her favorite hobby is drawing. because she likes all the different colors,She is really great!

点评：本文基本没有语法错误，但是篇幅太短，信息传递不够全面，同时没有出彩的短语结构，可以在这几方面再进行提升。

1) 写此类主题的作文可以不用分段

2)如能善用连接词会更好，比如在描写兴趣爱好的时候可以用“…but……”“not only…but also…”等等

篇4：点评作文

点评作文

谢谢李老师和周落瑜的妈妈，对我上作文的点评，我表示感谢。点评作文50字

小学生作文（中国大学网）

篇5：作文点评

你的文章如春雷般唤醒沉睡的大地，为新的一天增添新绿……”

“老师曾经对你说过，只要你用心去做一件事，你一定成功，

不是吗?现在你已经能写出一手好字，原来文静胆小的你也敢于在课堂上发言，为你的进步老师感到高兴。今后，发扬讲礼貌、爱劳动的优点，学习上，继续努力，认真书写，那么你会取得更好的成绩的，相信你会做到的!”

“当你把自己的“杰作”——一幅美丽的画交给老师欣赏的时候，老师真为你感到骄傲，你妈妈的心情一定跟老师一样激动吧!这幅画是你花了许多心血才创作完成的，对吗?告诉你，学习就像画画一样，只要我们肯下功夫，收获会更大。”

“你把拔河比赛中的“长绳”比作“拿不定主意的孩子”，太贴切了!比赛虽然失败了，但你的作文却写得非常成功!如果作文结尾把自己失望的心情变成短短的几句启示，就更好了!

你是一个多么重情的孩子啊!你多么善于感悟生活中的情，尽管你对作文有些胆怯，但你却把握了作文的真谛——我笔写我情。只要写出自己的真情，老师一定非常喜欢你的。

你是一个聪慧敏感的孩子，你也曾有一个快乐的家庭，你也爱你的家，可是当你的家庭出现不愉快的事后，你就不爱它了吗?用你的聪慧，用你的爱去召唤家庭的和睦幸福吧

在你的笔下，秋天是多么美啊!老师从你的作文中看到了那高远而深蓝的天空，看到了金黄的稻田、南飞的北雁和那飘零的黄叶，这一切，无不让我感受到秋天的美丽与神奇。我多么想对秋天说：秋天啊!化腐朽为神奇的秋天，你使学生的作文多么优美啊

篇6： 作文点评

作文点评

1．叙事中夹写景，以已度人，将心比心

2．作文将…写得细致入微，字里行间透露出阳光般的温暖，使作文的主题自然而然升华到了较高的境界

3．外形描述十分搞笑，突出了…的可爱介绍中融入了自己的思想，有感染力

4．本文是一篇较为成熟的叙事明理之作，作文以准确流畅的语言，展示了实验的全过程，跌宕起伏，妙趣横生小作者观察仔细，叙述时井然有序

5．本文三大成功之处:首先注意选取最完美的片断来写，其次用词准确，第三作文结构紧凑

6．巧用伏笔是作文的一大特点作文第一段就为全篇故事的发展做了极好的铺垫这种构思十分巧妙，能够借鉴

7．作文简洁明了，语言平淡朴实

8．本文用词准确，严密，语言平实自然，而比喻，拟人等修辞的运用更使作文锦上添花

9．比喻句用得精当加入了古诗进行联想，富有韵味

10．结束得有点突然，夸张了

11．要求透过虚构的故事来表达一种哲理

12．全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。

13．全文酣畅淋漓，一气呵成，蕴藏着欢乐与期盼，真挚感人开头出手不凡

14．你很善于抓住事物的特点进行具体描绘，展示了…，文笔间渗透了情感

15．作文语言清新活泼，描述能抓住事物的主要特征，篇幅短小精悍，值得一读

16．孩子的气的语言很有意思

17．作文真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分

18．简单介绍状况，自然过渡到下一段;

19．本文在故事情节上或许并无个性之吸引人之处，但仍不失为一篇成功之作，其一，较好地刻画了主角的形象，其二语言生动丰富，生活气息浓，起到了良好的表情达意之效果

20．本文采用了第一人称的写法，使得…具有很大的优势，对于塑造人物，表现中心起到了良好的作用，读起来亲切自然可信思路清晰，节奏明快

21．作文真实生动，情真意切，个性是…使用权作文极具感染力，发人深思

22．…切合实际，蕴含着朴素而深刻的哲理，读来令人精神振奋，情绪激昂

23．过渡自然，每一段交待得很清楚

24．作文线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行作文开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手

25．结尾同样搞笑

26．作文的“读”与“感”联系紧密，事例叙述行动，开头打动人心，具有真情实感

27．作文边叙事边抒情结尾处集中表达情感，既照应开头又总结全文首尾连贯，一气呵成

28．透过丰富人物的语言和动作，衬托出人物的思想品质作文想象合情合理，叙述自然生动，结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出

29．拟人化语言使作文更显得生动活泼

30．作文自始自终充满着对…的尊敬与感激，…情深，感人肺腑，这正是的震撼力之所在

31．能过合理的想象，反映出意味深长的哲理，…行文流畅，简洁，充分发挥了自己的想像力，是一篇不错的…作文清逸婉丽，流畅连贯，尤其人物语言幽默风趣，再加上一些精妙词语的使用，无形中为作文增添了不少情趣

32．全文可圈可点的佳句不少，给作文增添了些文学情趣

33．文中描绘的…清新活泼，欢快明朗字里行间跳动着的童心，使作文也有了生命力

34．语言诙谐搞笑，情节安排曲折生动，开头与结尾的呼应巧妙本文篇幅虽短，但资料生动具体，段落明确，语言朴实，通俗易懂

35．作文语言通俗易懂，贴近生活实际，读来令人倍感亲切。

36．全文语言流畅，行文舒展自如，自然洒脱，称得上是一篇较成功的之作

37．开头直奔主题，也是一种写法

38．作文按事情发展的顺序，记叙了…的事，语言比较流畅，层次较清楚，自始自终显得其乐融融。

39．作文的结构简洁合理，作者对原文的理解也十分深刻透彻全文语言铿锵有力，掷地有声，读来令人热血沸腾，心潮澎湃

40．事例叙述得生动具体，人物的言行贴合各自身份特点可见你是个生活的有心人作文来源于生活，因此语言虽然不怎样优美，但却真实搞笑，写得入情入理

41．叙述事情条理清晰，能正确地使用动词，运用比喻贴切，生动献计献策读后能从中受到教育

42．本文的优点有二：切入点小。山水的散文，往往会描述祖国山河的壮丽，作者并没有重点写祖国山水的壮美，而是从家乡的小山小河写起，从家乡山的灵秀，水的灵动出发，写出对家乡山水的热爱，很好的诠释了主题。语言灵动，作者的语言基本功十分扎实，作者用词十分考究，注意运用修辞手法，使作文在灵动中见内涵，形象中蕴哲理，是一篇不错的作品。

43．作文凭着丰富的想象，凭着多彩的语言，将…呈现读者面前

44．透过仔细观察，采用了适宜的语言把…绘声绘色地描述了出来，作文虽短但不显单调，语言通俗但不失风趣

45．作文不长，但过程叙述得很清楚，人物的活动描述得也具体，真实可信，生动搞笑，全文结构紧凑，完整，文笔也较流畅

46．作文融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使作文生动具体

47．全文节奏明快，语言清新，始终洋溢着诙谐与风趣，读来其乐无穷。

48．音乐是美的，而的语言同样优美诗一般的语言梦一般的想象，多美啊!

49．作品的构思是巧妙的，文笔也是简洁流畅想象大胆，富有创造力，作文读起来新颖奇特极具吸引力

50．作文资料新颖，结构合理，流畅连贯，自然通达。

51．对人物的语言，神态，动作等，进行精心细腻的描绘，这是本文的一大特色结尾令人饱含期待与热情，言已尽，意犹未了

52．注意观察具体事物，并展开适宜的想象，这是本文的成功之处作文融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使作文生动具体，让人爱莫能助释手卷

53．比喻贴切，用词生动。

54．加入人物行为，使画面生动

55．开篇简明扼要，精炼有序;重点描述…给人留下深刻印象

56．作文自始自终充满着对…的尊敬与感激，…情深，感人肺腑，这正是本文的`震撼力之所在

57．朴实自然的童心体此刻文中，使作文散发着清新活泼的气息

58．虽为一件小事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地凸现了作文主题`

59．全文通俗易懂，趣味性强。

60．重点突出，详略得当，资料具体。

61．对实验现象的描述，能切中要害，详尽而全面作文体现了自然科学的趣味性和知识性，读来饶有兴味

62．以景喻情，开头颇有新意;倒叙开头，渲染意境

63．作文有理有据，说服力强，突出人物个性，上下文过渡自然，条理清晰，首尾照应，结尾点题，突出中心思想

64．对精彩地方进行简单描述;点面结合

65．透过丰富人物的语言和动作，衬托出人物的思想品质。

66．这篇短文的特点可概括为亲切，温馨，隽永

67．音乐是美的，而本文的语言同样优美诗一般的语言梦一般的想象，多美啊!

68．作文最后揭示中心之句，实属点晴之笔，概括之语，短促而有力

69．文中一系列表现人物动作的动词运用得准确，衬托手法运用得好

70．在故事情节上或许并无个性之吸引人之处，但仍不失为一篇成功之作，其一，较好地刻画了主角的形象，其二语言生动丰富，生活气息浓，起到了良好的表情达意之效果

71．作文头尾照应，中心明确，结构完整

72．本文主要优点有三:本文能紧扣题目要求，完整地写了…的过程，结构严谨，重点突出，语言朴实，简洁，流畅，开头和结尾都很自然，准确

73．全文语言朴实，结构自然…作文结构严谨，首尾呼应

74．全文眉目清晰，生动紧凑，趣味性强。

75．想象力较丰富，极具新意开头自我介绍，引入下文，另外，作文语言简明扼要，风格幽默误诙谐

76．这篇作文以具体的事例，生动优美的语言，新颖别致的写法，表现了对完美心灵的由衷赞

77．本文取材真实生活，选材恰当，很有新意，段落分明，过渡自然，情趣盎然，可读性强。

78．…以简单愉快的语气，向我们娓娓道来，令人回味无穷。

79．作文很有说服力，也发人深思从写作上来说，情节生动，作文有波澜，读起来深受教益

80．反问句开头，吸引读者

81．作文对……的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处，对作文重点…作了细腻而传神的刻画立意高远，令人赞叹

82．结尾简炼，感人

83．作文以…为结尾，言简意赅，其味无穷

84．全文清新秀逸，亲切委婉，朴素而不落俗淘，值得借见。

85．对细节传神的刻画，恰恰相反到好处地揭示人物的内心世界，这是本文的成功之处

86．全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑全文通俗易懂，趣味性强

87．以感受开头，以感受结尾这样便使作文前后照应，首尾连贯，同时又使作文主题回环复沓，感染力极强

88．主题凝炼，集中，议论深刻，有力，震撼人心

89．这部分参照课文中的例子，语言过于平板，可适当修改，使语言更生动

90．作文选材新颖，…这件事，乡村生活气息浓郁，富有儿童情趣读后令人身心愉悦，舒畅

91．采用比喻，拟人等修辞手法，形象地写出了…的美这部分还能够展开写以小见大，表现…

92．本文事情过程写得具体，明晰，条理清楚作者在叙事的同时加入了恰当的心理描述，充分表达了…

93．本文很好体现了…的特点，深刻的主题与新颖的构思相得益彰

94．结尾似乎没有写完，应能与开头照应观察细致，描述生动

95．情境描述调动起悬念;

96．作文虽短，但叙述生动描述细腻，生活气息浓厚，遣词造句准确传神

97．语言朴素，中心明确，构思合理，行文层次清楚

98．这篇作文的主要特色是叙述具体，细节真实，描述生动，有真情实感，并运用了比喻，拟人等修辞手法，把…写得十分传神，同时表达了…对…的喜爱

99．通篇作文语调简单幽默，显得妙趣横生，读来令人爱不释手。

100．作文开头简而得当，透过环境描述来衬托人物情绪，十分艺术化杂而不乱，能做到详略得当，重点突出结尾恰到好处地点明中心，语言朴实而含义深刻，耐人寻味

101．语言简练，规范，开篇吸引人

102．情节生动搞笑，叙述清楚完整，也表现出作者的聪明，机智，充满了家庭生活情趣，文笔流利活泼

103．作文能过清新搞笑的语言，描述了…的事字里行间，充满童年真童趣，欢声笑语不绝于耳，不失为一篇佳作详略得当，虚实相生，是本文的两大特色，……资料更丰富，更生动

104．作文的结构简洁合理，作者对原文的理解也十分深刻透彻。全文语言铿锵有力，掷地有声，读来令人热血沸腾，心潮澎湃。

105．充满童趣的拟人与比喻，使作文顿生光彩

106．作文资料新颖，结构合理，流畅连贯，自然通达细节描述颇具匠心极富功底

107．这一部分能够加入对话或者一些心理描述

108．本文语言虽然并不华丽，但却极为准确生动，情感丰富而真实，读来津津有味。

109．开头很活泼拟人化手法的运用使开头显得活泼。

110．作者对…观察仔细，描述细腻，语言生动活泼，表现手法富有新意

111．结尾含蓄，点明主题

112．作文有详有略，言之有序，资料生动具体，不失为一篇佳作

113．能把人物内心活动写得十分生动，的确难能可贵，给人留下了深刻的印象

114．作者观察细致，想像力丰富，运用拟人，比喻等手法，使生动活泼，引起了读者的兴趣

115．这段剩余，不如删去，使作文更简洁

116．本文语言虽然并不华丽，但却极为准确生动，情感丰富而真实，读来津津有味超多采用生活中的口语，使作文更显自然亲氏结尾以…点明中尽，含蓄隽永，意味深长

117．语言虽然并不华丽，但却极为准确生动，情感丰富而真实，读来津津有味超多采用生活中的口语，使作文更显自然亲氏结尾以…点明中尽，含蓄隽永，意味深长

118．开头简洁自然，结构清晰，心理描述真实，体现出作者良好的语言驾驭潜力

119．作文开头交待得十分清楚，起到总领全文的作用结尾处寥寥数语，显示了作者探索科学奥秘的远大理想和坚定信心，催人奋进

120．…以…开头，较有新意前因后果娓娓道来

121．这是一篇很有新意的…作文构思巧妙，语言朴实自然

122．这篇作文取材新颖，构思奇妙，语言生动活泼。字里行间透露出清新的生活气息和儿童情趣。

123．作文能过清新搞笑的语言，描述了…的事。字里行间，充满童年真童趣，欢声笑语不绝于耳，不失为一篇佳作。

124．借景抒情，托物咏志，很特色

125．对…生动而详细的叙述，是本文的一天特色，也体现了作者观察的敏锐与细致这是作文成功的一大要素

126．发挥奇妙想象，运用精妙比喻

127．全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。

128．…特写镜头别开生面，情趣盎然全文充满童心童趣，读来倍感亲切

129．这段描述读来令人感动

130．作文用孩子的语言叙事，显得自然，朴素，犹如一股清泉结尾点题，起到了画龙点睛的作用

131．排比名的使用为作文增色不少

132．事例叙述生动，具体，趣味性强，且与前面的比喻…一脉相承最后，作者用寥寥数语，表现出了自已对…的情感，令人感动

133．开头直奔主题，让人一目了然

134．作者构思巧，善于选点展开，行文跌宕起伏，耐人寻味语言活泼明快，富有情趣故事虽平凡，感情却真挚，充沛，感人作文结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉

135．比喻形象，贴切，精彩的结尾可谓点睛之笔

136．作文含蓄的结尾，既点题，又耐人寻味作文开头引人入胜，吸引读者…点面结合，使作文生动，具体，详略得当

137．作文值得肯定之处有三点：其一选点小，切入话题恰当。数字是表象，背后是潜力与素质，但人们往往更看重直观的数字，以数字掩盖素质在生活中司空见惯。作者在行文中将笔墨直指数字与素质之间的裂缝，观点集中鲜明。其二，三个分论点层层递进，结构严谨，逻辑缜密，颇有气势。其三，作文的语言极有分寸，令人信服。如“数字往往只能代表过去”中的“往往”，“很多重要的素质是无法用数字衡量的”等。在议论文中把握住了说话的分寸，就能避免观点的绝对化，使作文无懈可击。

138．本文以…为线索，使用权作文连贯，流畅，衔接自然，同时，透过前后具体事例的比较抨击了……，作文语言生动丰富，可读性强

139．对人物的语言，神态，动作等，进行精心细腻的描绘，这是的一大特色结尾令人饱含期待与热情，言已尽，意犹未了

140．简单交待时间，地点和结果…

141．场面和气氛描述为作文增色不少;

142．作文开头新颖，具有先声夺人之效使读者一见面就能对人物产生…的印象作文前后连贯，构成完整的形象

143．…要求透过虚构的故事来表达一种哲理

144．叙述自然生动结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出。

145．由景生情，结尾自然

146．本文资料生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理

147．作文在民间传说的基础上，进行合理想象和生动描述，演绎出一篇精彩的童话故事，读来饶搞笑味

148．对于景色的描述，语言简练而准确，联想则为触景生情，情景自然融合。

149．结尾呼应文题，点明中心

150．这篇作文充满了激情，从字里行间能体会到小作者对…的喜爱之情全文层次清晰，语句流畅

151．以…为线索，使用权作文连贯，流畅，衔接自然，同时，透过前后具体事例的比较抨击了……，作文语言生动丰富，可读性强

152．以饱满的激情，描述了……

153．注意观察具体事物，并展开适宜的想象，这是本文的成功之处。

154．比喻贴切，用词生动

155．对于景色的描述，语言简练而准确，联想则为触景生情，情景自然融合全文清新秀逸，亲切委婉，朴素而不落俗淘，值得借鉴

156．用了列数字，举例子的方法，很形象

157．简要叙述前因，进行铺垫

158．心理描述细腻，比喻句用得好

159．这篇作文充满了激情，从字里行间能体会到小作者对…的喜爱之情。全文层次清晰，语句流畅。

160．自然承上启下，细节描述突出人物品质，令人感动

161．开头点题，用词很吸引人

162．特写镜头别开生面，情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣，读来倍感亲切。

163．作文对……的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处，对作文重点…作了细腻而传神的刻画。

164．充分运用语言，动作，心理描述，使事情具体，生动

165．对…的比喻用得妙

166．充分运用动静结合的写法，并辅以比喻，拟人等手法，透过生动，形象的语言的描绘，使读者仿佛置身于梦境一般结尾处对人物的赞美，情真意切，感人至深

167．作者构思巧，善于选点展开，行文跌宕起伏，耐人寻味。

篇7：初中英语作文

你知道什么是座右铭吗？人们说这些东西有特殊的意义。我有一个超级座右铭，它像魔法一样起作用。我的座右铭是“尽力而为。”

我总是这么说。我的.座右铭每天都在指导我。它对我很有帮助。它帮助我面对挑战，带走我的工作。它也让我感觉更强大。例如，我在一次重要的考试中生病了。我非常紧张和害怕，所以我告诉自己，“尽你最大的努力。”然后我尽了最大努力。我全力以赴，做得很好。

这句格言可以让你变得自信。不要担心会发生什么，不要把自己和别人比较。尽你最大的努力，你就会没事。如果你尽你最大的努力，任何事情都是可能的，所以每天都要尽你最大的努力。

篇8：初中英语作文

It is very important for us to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. We should exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest , so it is important to go to bed early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn’t drink wine or smoke, They are bad for our health. We should also stay away from junk food.

篇9：初中英语作文

【荐】初中英语作文

Madame Curie was one of the greatest scientists in the world. She was born in 1867. She first lived in Poland, then went to France. When she was very young she was interested in science. She worked very hard and discovered the element radium. She received the Nobel Prizes in 1903 and in 1911.

For the last ten years of her life she was almost blind. The radium with which she had worked for many years had caused blindness and illness and finally a disease of the blood. She died in Paris at the age o~ 66.

Today she is remembered as a great scientist. But she is also remembered for her determination and courage.

篇10：初中英语作文

everything you have done for me.

I know you are worried about my study, so you don’t want me to play basketball too much. But I can’t study all day along. Sometime I need to relax. I really enjoy playing basketball. It keeps me healthy and strong.

Could you allow me to play basketball for an hour and a half every day? I promise I will try my best in my study.

篇11：初中英语作文

微笑，这个词多么温暖!它能让任何人快乐。而这种幸福来自心底。

它不像热情的笑声，只是温暖，让你的心温暖。

母亲的微笑就像春风，当你悲伤时，温柔的微笑，它会使你再次快乐;当你失败时，它会让你站起来，再次努力工作;当你放弃的时候，它会让你再次尝试。

微笑，很容易，但也很有用。

所以，让我们学会微笑吧。每个人都需要别人的.微笑。当我们给别人一个微笑的时候，我们也会感到快乐。也许下一次，当你需要微笑时，得到你微笑的人会把你的微笑给你。

让我们学会经常微笑，我相信它甚至能让整个人感到温暖。带着微笑生活，每天都是阳光。

篇12：初中英语作文

My best friend is a loyal and brave boy. When a bully teased me, he came to my rescue right away.

He always remembers my birthday and he is fun to be with.

He tells funny jokes and stories. He always makes me laugh.

Finally, he is a very good listener and he knows how to cheer me up when I'm down.

I hope we'll stay friends forever.

篇13：初中英语作文

The night of November 12th, 20xx was indeed a glorious night for our Chines, because the Opening Ceremony of Asian Games was held on Haixinsha Island in Guangzhou. Over 7000 people took part in it.

All of the performances were impressive, but the most interesting one was Sail on Cloud. During that programme, 180 performers were hung in the air to dance. How wonderful it was! Every audience burst out praise. I couldn’t help shouting. But it was a pity that I just watched it from TV. How I wish I were there!

篇14：初中英语作文

Transportation has been greatly changed in the past few years. In ancient days, people used to travel by horse or carriage. The journey was often tiring and tedious. Then people had buses, trains and ships, which could shorten the time of the long-distance trip. Now we have not only more private cars, but also planes and high-speed rails. All of these modern transports could offer us a quick and pleasant travel. Thus, more and more people enjoy traveling very much these days. In conclusion, modern transportation has completely changed our life. Thanks to modern transportation, our world is becoming smaller and smaller.

篇15：初中英语作文

These are lots of books in our daily life. Some are about history, some are novels, and some are even about the dream in the future. I think it's useful to read stories, because it can be used sometimes. Once, there was a very difficult question in an important history exam history, which wasn't mentioned in our history books, even our teacher has never told us about it. But I remembered clearly that I had read it in a history story, so I answered the question without difficulty and became the only student in our class who answered the question correctly. In my view, it's useful to read stories.

篇16：初中英语作文

Students need enough sports and activities to do physical exercises and relax, but in some schools they are not given enough time to do outside activities. Its harmful for students growth. Teachers ask students to spend most of their time on studies. But when they feel tired and bored, students cant concentrate on studies. They are in bad health.

Its necessary to give students enough time to do outside activities. After good relaxation and rest, students will work harder.

Pay attention to students health and growth.

篇17：初中英语作文

Going to school and receiving education are part of my daily life. Some children don't like the school life, but they still need to study every day. For me, I find the great joy as I work with my classmates. Sometimes when the teacher asks us to finish the job in a group, we will discuss and share our opinion after class. We learn from each other and get improved quickly. We become close friends, so in the weekend, we will hang out and find something interesting to do. I love school life. It makes me grow up and become a better person. Thanks to my friends’ help, I make progress greatly.

篇18：初中英语作文

March 12th is Tree Planting Day. This year our school bought enough trees before that day . On that day , we didn't had classes . The teachers and our classmates planted trees around our school.

We began to planted trees as soon as we got to school . some students dug the holes . Some students put the trees into the holes.

Some students put the earth back to the holes. Then we pushed the earth hard with our feet . At last we watered the trees as much as possible.

From then on we looked after the trees carefully and the trees grew very well . It made our school more beautiful .And How happy we are !

篇19：初中英语作文

It is well-known that water isindispensable in existing, in producing and in living. And we should not wasteof a drop of water.

众所周知，在生产和生活中水是必不可少的。我们不应该浪费一滴水。

First, water isdefinitely important for life. As is known to us all, water is necessary tosupport life. Without water, human beings, animals and plants cannot exist atall.

首先，水对生命是非常重要的。众所周知，水是维持生命所必需的。没有水，人类，动物和植物都不复存在。

Second, water is also significant forproducing. For one thing, industrial production needs a lot of water, such asusing water to generate electricity. For another, agricultural production isalso in need of water, especially in irrigation.

第二，水对于生产也具有重要的意义。一方面，工业生产需要大量的水，如，用水发电。另一方面，农业生产也需要水，特别是在灌溉方面。

Finally, water is indispensable in life. Inour daily life, we are not able to finish many things without water, such ascooking and washing.

最后，水在我们生活中是不可或缺的。在我们的日常生活中，没有水，很多事情我们都无法完成，如做饭、洗衣服。

To sum up, water is absolutely significantfor our living, for producing and for living. Therefore, we need to make fulluse of each drop of water and form a habit of saving water.

总之，水对我们的生存，生产和生活是非常重要的。因此，我们要充分利用每一滴水，养成节约用水的习惯。

篇20：初中英语作文

As there are alot of languages in the world, it will make lots of difficulties when wecommunicate with people from other countries. However, smile is a kind of magiclanguage that everyone can read easily, no matter where he comes from.

由于世界上有很多种语言，这让我们在与来自其他国家的人交流时带来了很多的困难。然而，微笑是一种神奇的语言，不管来自何方大家都可以轻松地理解。

For one thing, smilecan transfer warmth and energy. As graduates, we are faced with a lot ofrecruitment. Each of us is nervous. But when we see the smile on others’ faces,it's just like the golden sunshine. Smile is just the medium of positiveenergy.

首先，微笑可以传递温暖和能量。作为大学生，我们面临着很多招聘。我们每个人都很紧张。但当我们看到别人脸上的微笑，就像温暖的阳光。微笑只是正能量的媒介。

For the otherthing, smile can express friendship. When we praise others, just bonus a smile,it will be prettier than amount of words.

其次，微笑可以表示友谊。当我们称赞别人时，只要奖励一个微笑，那会比任何词都漂亮。

It is obviousthat smile is a good way to show your respect to others. Smile is the shortestdistance between two people. Wish you have good relationships with others.

很明显的微笑是展示尊敬的好方法。微笑是两个人之间最短的距离。希望大家可以与他人友好相处。

篇21：初中英语作文

When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy. Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds' sound. I am so close to the nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

篇22：初中英语作文

When I watch the TV series, there always present the rich family's life, but I don't feel envious about the rich life. It is obvious that though these people live the better life, the cost is that their parents spend less time to play with them. The time to stay with our parents is really important, while the rich parents have much work to do, so they don't have much private hours. I was born in an ordinary family. My parents will never miss the moment when I need them. I am so thankful to life, because I have my parents' love. What's more, I have made many good friends. We share our interest and have a lot in common.

篇23：初中英语作文

Cell phone has been the indispensable part of our life today. For many students, they bring cell phone to school, which annoys many teachers, because the students are not listening to them when they are passing the knowledge. Actually, this situation can't all blame students and teachers have some duty. If they find the attractive way to show knowledge, surely students will focus their attention. It is not possible to ask students to hand in their cell phones, as they get used to using it. Most students will not play cell phone in the classroom, because they know their duty. For the students who can't focus their attention, even without cell phone, they still don't want to study.

篇24：初中英语作文

噢。你的那些劣势。你的数学，从这次你填的作业来看，你并没有很好地把基础知识掌握，因为，你从心里上在排斥着它，马上跳过去去做大题了，而且并没能第一时间，没能在三分钟内完成一道选择题，但是，待你后来心情好的时候再去填的时候，你填的很棒，并没有那么糟糕。因此，在填数学卷的时候，请你一定记住，你的效率，你的高效。

填数学的时候，思路想休息的时候，就想想，你是一个被打击过的人，别再让数学拖你分了，它没有那个资格！记住记住，填的时候，你的思维一定要悦动起来，绝对不要发呆，因为你一发呆，时间肯定不够的。同时，填了那么多次卷子，记住，三分钟内没有解决的，马上跳过，不要再重蹈覆辙，导致后面的没有时间填或者填的匆忙丢的分比捡回来的分还要多，真是得不偿失。

还有一个，你知道你上次数学败得灰头土脸的重要原因是什么嘛？你的计算。明明可以口算的题，你却一定要在草稿纸上写，何必呢？相信自己。你的心算能力还是不差的，不要被数学打败，不要因为数学不好就否定了自己的心算能力，因为我知道，每次你在心算的时候，你的心情都是悦动的，你的心情都是非常好的，因为我知道，每次你心算的时候，你都是主动学习的，而不是被动地学习，同样，你在心算的时候，你的脑子转的特别快，你不觉得吗？因此，不要连非常简单的12×13还要笔算，真的浪费时间，而且还不知不觉中让你思维死了。

紧接着，你可以选择先做大题，因为你更喜欢做大题，因为你喜欢很有规律的开始，草率地结束，而大题要求的是书面，因此，我允许你先做大题。不要再去关心时间，也不要再因旁边的人刷刷的笔声而心慌，你一慌，你的思路就没了。你只要保证你的正确率和效率，你就不会输，因为，其实在整个年级，大家的水平几乎都是一样的，唯一不一样的，就是在考试的时候的心态还有心情，因此，不要怀疑自己的能力，不是别人让你慌，而是你给别人安全感。

接着，不要糊涂。真的不要糊涂，不要明明想着这一道题，却马上地想要跳过进入第二道题！

哦了，信心，我想，你不会差。就像爸爸说的，你打的基础坚固就不会怕风吹和雨打！你不会差，因为，你可以比老师更快速地解决一道难题，因此，证明你的IQ是没有问题的，唯一有问题的是，你的心态！

so, 不要慌，要悦动！

篇25：初中英语作文

根据中文和英文提示，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。

所给英文提示词仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

你有过独自一人在家的经历吗？请根据你的亲身经历选择情况A或情况B完成短文。情况A：曾经独自一人在家。你的某次经历及其感受是什么样的？

情况B：未曾独自一人在家。如果有这样的一次机会，你的父母会放心吗？你又会怎样照顾

自己呢？

提示词：look after, have fun, miss, grow, worried, excited, surprised

参考例文1:

I ’ve been home alone for several times and my first stay at home alone was memorable.

When I was twelve, once both of my parents were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. They left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I actually kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for mom to do it.

I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.

参考例文2：

Up to now I’ve never had a chance to be at home alone. But if there’s one in the future, I guess Iwill take care of myself very easily.The reasons are as follows.

First of all, I keep a good daily routine. That’s to say, I can get up and go to bed at usual time by myself. And I can cook simple food. The most important reason is thatI can balance my study and entertainment.

Therefore, my parents won’t worry about me if they have to stay away for a few days.

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第一档：（15-13分）

完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许有个别语言错误。

第二档：（12-9分）

符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇满足文章需要，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有一些语言错误，但不影响整体理解。

第三档：（8-5分）

部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。

第四档：（4-1分）

与题目有关的`内容不多，不能表达出自己的思想。只能简单拼凑一些词语，所写内容难以理解。

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